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Scratch That... New Revision of M+B Coming Shortly

Posted 3:55pm Sat Jan 31, 2009 by Aaron Dunlap

Just below this post you will find me telling you that Mind + Body was just edited for grammar and will be back on sale in a few days.

That is not the case.

In going through the book for the millionth time, I kept finding myself unable to ignore all of the flaws in the story and the language that I've been telling myself aren't that bad.

I've finally decided to do a proper revision. I'll be changing a few minor story elements and generally cleaning up some of the language. Once I'm finished with that, I'll post the revised edition online (I'll keep the current draft archived online for prosperity's sake), re-submit it for self-publishing on Amazon, and (most interestingly) send out manuscripts again and try to get it published for reals.

Once I'm finished with the revision, I'll describe some of the changes and the motivations behind them.

Until then, however, it's unable to buy in print. You can still download the current draft and read it online.

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