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Young Adults Only

Posted 10:21am Fri Mar 06, 2009 by Aaron Dunlap

I've finally come to the realization that I need to start calling Mind & Body a young adult novel.

I've resisted this for a long, long time. Just because the book's about a 17-year-old doesn't mean it's for 17-year-olds, even though in roughly 100% of the cases, when a book's about teenagers it's marketed for teenagers.

The number of rejection letters I've gotten from literary agents combined with some advice from actual authors and editors have finally changed my mind. From now on, query letters to agents will refer to the book as a young adult, or YA novel.

This dramatically changes its genre and potential place in the market. It also endangers the public's perception of it. I think the story is perfectly accessible to adults, and classifying it as YA will probably scare a lot of them away.

I don't like it, but it's something I have to do if I ever intend to get this thing published for real.

The thing is, most YA books are written with the intention of being read by teenagers. They come off like after-school specials, stories about teenagers written by guys in their 40s, filled with 10-year-old slang and awkwardly inserted life lessons or morality tales.

"Yo, dog, you want to like, totally get high?" asked Scooter, looking up from his portable digital entertainment device.
"I don't know," Daeryk said, hesitantly. "I heard that's not good for you..."
"Don't be a square," Scooter replied. "It's totally rockin'."

Stuff like that.

In my case, the only possible reason to consider it a YA title is because its two major characters are under 18. If the story were moved from high school to college, or the characters were 26, suddenly YA wouldn't be an option.

That doesn't change the fact that the above does make it more likely that young adults will appreciate the book than adults will.

I guess the book could be refreshing for young readers. A Young Adult novel that doesn't try to preach or talk down to them. A grown-up novel for teens.

And now I resign to the fact that I'll still never get published. And if I do, I'll never be taken seriously, for all I write is crummy books for teens.

Comments

hey! you dont write curmmy books! its a great book and im and adult!
Sat Mar 14, 2009 12:29pm    Quote | Reply

Sebatinsky

What kind of fiction do you like to read, Aaron? I spent a lot of time reading YA fiction as a youth, and I still do, somewhat (I suppose I'm still fairly young). In my lifetime, at least, there has been enough quality YA fiction that I've never encountered much that talks down to youth.

I don't mean to insult you, but I have read targeted YA fiction that is higher quality than M+B. That being said, I think this is a very publishable book, especially if you spend some time on it with a good editor.

Best luck with those submissions!
Sat Mar 14, 2009 1:25pm    Quote | Reply

Aaron

I realize now that I haven't really read anything specifically intended for young people since the 6th grade. After that it was all Crichton and Ludlum and standard assigned reading like Bradbury and Ayn Rand.

I never really needed "just for me" books after I'd learned how to read. Maybe I just don't understand them.

I read Little Brother to make sure Cory hadn't psychically stolen any of my ideas, and it was in there that I found an offputting tone. Or maybe I just find the idea of trying to explain public-key encryption to 12-year-olds who a few chapters earlier had to be told how laptops work slightly ridiculous.

Tue Mar 17, 2009 1:34pm    Quote | Reply

Capn

I didn't find your book favoring young adults over anyone else at all really. I can certainly see where the pacing of it seems to favor the younger crowd and it definately keeps the reader engaged rather than tossing in every little detail that some "adult" writers seem to do. Even so, you aren't missing/lacking any details unless it is deliberate for the continuation of the story or utterly insignificant.

He's totally a ninja btw...
Tue Mar 17, 2009 9:17pm    Quote | Reply

Aaron

"He's totally a ninja btw..."

Dude. Stop spoiling the sequel.
Sun Mar 29, 2009 4:02pm    Quote | Reply

Sebatinsky

Aaron - I actually found the expository tone of Little Brother to be very similar to that of Mind + Body.

Most YA novels are not written for 12 year olds. They're written for 12-20 year olds, which I think is an important difference, not to mention how many YA novels are very popular with adults.

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